24th June

Firstly, I learned how to write concluding sentence.
I can choose the way depend on my topic sentence.
If I write a surprising topic sentence→I can repeat it again.
If topic sentence is general and not surprising →I should summrize my opinion.

Secondly, how to reference information.
I must put information, year, author's name , data and page.
I must not trust Wikipedia! I should quote from government web site.

17th June

Today I learned what topic sentence is good.
When I write a topic sentence I need controlling ideas the following sentences.

And also supporting sentence is important to understand the paragraph.
I must consider who is the reader and control my ideas.

10th June

Today I learn rule of academic writing.

• No contraction
• No personal- if we write own experience we can I or my...
  
• No sexist terms
  
• Not use ''and so on''
• No casual Words
  
• No phrasal verb
• Not to ask question

I have to rewrite based on these rule!

3rd June

Today I learned how to share my documents with my partner.
We can comment and check our e-potfolio each other.
If I change our format, I can work on micro office word,

however we can't use internet!!

When we write a essay, I must not use personal pronounce ,such as ''I'' and ''we ''...!

deadline of our essay is July 15th.

I must work hard!