Thursday, May 20, 2010

20th May

We learn how to write a introduction.
1.Attention Getter
We should quote from statistics, famous person and famous words. It is need to be shocking surprising,humor.
And also when we quote statistics, it is good to change a number that we can imagine easily, because it has more impact!

2.Background
We should write background about the topic. it helps to understand thesis statement.
How long sentences I need is depend on my topic.

3.Thesis Statement
topic/ claim/reason

three reason link with each body!

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I changed my research topic a little, because last time I couldn't decide clearly.
My research topic is ''Is Cram school(Juku) good for children?''

Wednesday, May 12, 2010

6th May

I'm so sorry it's too late to write this blog....

Last time, I learned how to write essay. I need topic, claim and reason.
I have to write 5 paragraph essay,
1. intro 2body 3 body 4body 5conclusion
and each body needs 3 reason, it is called rule of 3!


We tell own research question to everyone and share information.
My research question is '' Japanese should have more rests''
I couldn't tell well at that time, but what I want to research and write is
sometimes Japanese is said that Japanese work too hard.
For example, student have a lot of things that they have to do everyday..

We decided partner. My partner is Nana!